Thursday, October 23, 2008

Story treatment - Organized chaos

Treatment:
Organized chaos

A girl gets a call. A friend is coming over. She then realizes just how messy her room is. She starts cleaning.
She gets distracted by a book she was putting away. Continues tidying.
Takes a snack break. Continues cleaning.
Makes her bed. She's done.
Goes to open the door for her friend.

The end.

1 comment:

Ravi said...

I think this can work fine -- might have to trim it a bit?